Thursday, February 25, 2016

Room for improvement

Right now, I'm planning on making the story multi-perspective. I'm doing that because it's too short if I don't the novel will be too short. Right now I'm changing perspective after an action scene so it's not constantly action. I've only changed perspective once, but I will have a couple more once the first draft is done. After the first draft, I'll go through it and add in more perspectives since so far the book is more than halfway done  and it's only been the perspective of one person.

Thursday, February 18, 2016

Good news... And not so good news

While the idea showcase was a couple days ago and that was good, there's something that's not quite so good. I'll start out with the good news first by saying that I think I did pretty good on the idea showcase. Everyone who visited my project said that it was a good project, but there was around 12 people at the idea showcase. The bad news is that I'm not sure about my book being a book. I think that it would be better as a graphic novel series. The problem is that I know less about writing a graphic novel series than I do about writing a book. The other problem is that I can't draw. I would have to find an artist that would draw it for me, and transfer all of what I have to a series by re-writing it. I'm not sure about what I would do, but I do know that I wrote far too little, and when I get to editing, I'll have to write a lot more.

Thursday, February 11, 2016

Constructive thinking

Currently, everyone has entered the Garden of Eden. Everyone entered for when they gained acceptance from other people. While they've all showed secrets, there was one character that seemed like he was an open book. It turned out that he had the most secrets of all. One of them was so deadly that he didn't tell anyone else, so the other main characters wouldn't want to kill him. When they entered the Garden of Eden, they found out that it has changed a lot since the war. All of the plants are now burnt to ash. It also has lots of hidden chambers. To go through the chambers, they have to use certain swords as if they were keys. The Garden of Eden is where they go through a series of trails to see if they can fight Satan.

Thursday, February 4, 2016

A work in progress... Somewhat

I'm now on page 50 of my book. Everyone is learning more about Lucifer, God, and the seven original sins. There has recently been a plot twist that affected how the characters see the main character. Now, the four main characters are learning more about each other, and are being careful about how they treat each other.
I'm still preparing for the idea showcase. I've currently made a draft of what I want to show to my audience. I will soon have it checked and will (eventually, after I make edits) transfer all of the information to a tri-fold.